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Old 01-23-2005, 12:19 PM   #1
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Nocturnal Notification

Nocturnal Notification
By: Mark R. Sosa
Death’s Door @ www.death777.com
Copy written 2004

Single needle flesh prodding detection
Of my souls elapsed innermost spiritual infection
Discharging bountiful supplies of filtered
Decrepit red lifeless plasma
Erupting regurgitation solely for this
My poetic demoniacal nocturnal notification

In unfathomable regions of my sane braincase
I personally conceptualize my animation operation
Thru numerous engraved purgatory passages of
Lucid homo-sapiens in their cryptic carnage demise

My pilot 0.5 extra fine blood induced ink penmanship
Transmits to those lightlessness inhabitants
Who personify both of this earth’s black eyes
To unfasten their optic surveillance and to
Levitate their detached clone to re-evaluate
Their daily infernal mortal individuality
To abolish this coma sequence hatchet carnality and
Their proud leather masked affiliation in Hell’s hierarchy

A mammoth music organs’
Final instrument extension is
A human shredding liquidation pipe
Used daily as perdition’s chosen
666 brethren killing device
Unleashing their sandy souls ashes
This non-sound proof crematorium
Vocalizes the masses pre-entry
Before their intimate irrevocable excretion

Heaven’s life everlasting
Fire escape was disengaged
Yet remaining unblemished for years
Unblemished for months and even for days
Prior to this holocaust herding tribulation parade

In your inward most mind-set belief
You may conclude that my dreamland euphoria
Lusts for your individual obliteration
Yet in my realness authenticity
I’m divulging to all how my
Ex-nail protruding bloated corpse was
For an era in my stage of existence
On an unquenchable pro-suicidal
Carnal incarcerated quest of lunacy

Then in my nethermost depleted fetal position
I inquired about this personal 777
Golgotha’s bloodbath of relationship spiritually
Discerning instantaneously
Religions religious fallacy

In acquirement of this imperishable inheritance
All my self mortification is banished
Gangrene vices amputated thru
The curtain of revitalization wholeness
All extinguished by supernatural transfiguration
Past destructive iniquity now erased from my slate
White peace maneuvers in to infiltrate
To thunder rush my former
Blasphemic artic ice mind chamber
Rationality apprehended then transported
To my nonpoisonous cerebral safe haven

Atonement of the core soul substance
Quietude to then be distributed to the multitudes
Deliverance deems regular penance
Abounding tangible serenity
This chargeless gift is bestowed for all humanity
Just a single uncomplicated verbal plea
Shall guarantee this renewal birth activation complete
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Old 01-23-2005, 09:54 PM   #2
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how about you go lie down for a few years, better yet how about you go lie down till regamortice sets in .
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Old 01-23-2005, 11:28 PM   #3
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I think you mean Rigor Mortis.

Anyway, I hope your friends at church give you a solid rodgering for trying to spread the good word to a bunch of metalheads.
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Old 01-24-2005, 04:52 AM   #4
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Hell yeah... I mean... good luck.
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Old 01-24-2005, 09:59 AM   #5
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I hope your friends at church give you a solid rodgering for trying to spread the good word to a bunch of metalheads.
haha after the word "rodgering" I read the rest of the sentence in a british accent.
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I think you mean Rigor Mortis.
Yeah.... that’s exactly what i was trying to say .. thanks for that
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Old 01-24-2005, 02:13 PM   #7
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Talking Hey everybody!

Actually I don't go to church that much, I'm a tattooed fan of extreme metal and people really don't understand me. So, I'd rather be around other metalheads.

Take care,
Mark
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Peace be with you my friend too! Thanks

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