What Do You Think Of This BM Track?

[Fadeless Plague]

CAn you all leave you coments on what you think of this test track it has no drums or bass just vocals and guitar! Please rember that it's just a test were no a band yet were just testing our selfs!

immortal-life.wav (http://www.bruce-lee-jh.com/1.wav)

[RilontskY]

i think 2 of the screams sounded cool.. mostly the vocals sound pretty dumb.. the guitar (agaiN) sounds ok sometimes but mostly especially the second half it sounds totally random and not thought out..

maybe you have something, maybe you don't.. it just needs lots more work..

The vocals need to be more demonic/evil and less awkward sounding

Work harder on the music.. it doesn't flow

also.. more feeling!

[Fadeless Plague]

well it was just a test it's nothik big i was just testing but when we get going i am confedent!!!

the first pit actualy was the riff's and the last bit was kinda random becuase i got a bit lost :(

[Ghettoblaster]

Work some more with the song, and it might become something good! Like for instance, the guitar maybe should be "flowing" a bit better, if you know what I mean.

[Ghettoblaster]

...and you need to work ALOT with your vocals